Reply To: The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend. “Of the two leading real estate firms in our town.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 8:08 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 110 words.

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