Reply To: Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 10, 2021 at 8:17 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words. 
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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