Reply To: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.  Reply To: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 12, 2021 at 7:15 pm

Score: 50.1

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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