Reply To: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 12, 2021 at 7:15 pm

Score: 50.1

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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