Reply To: 1. Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing 1. Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: 1. Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 12, 2021 at 7:21 pm

Score: 54.4

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 35% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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