Reply To: Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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January 12, 2021 at 7:37 pm

Because there is a lot of lure[unclear/use literal writing  ] in our life, it[unclear pronoun  ] is straightforward[wrong word  ] to do (something distracted)[rephrase  ]. Thus we must have[vague/use stronger verb  ] [ article error ]ability to plan and organize. We can not[ spelling error ] (be addicted)[unclear/passive  ] to something[repetition/unclear  ] that can [ redundant ]distract our attention. We[starting a sentence with the same word  ] have to (cope with our work)[ unclear ] and therefore, we do not have much time using [wrong word  ]on basketball games or drinking (some wine)[  rephrase].[ punctuation error with conjunction word ] And we[start a sentence with the same word  ] should realize what we should do,[punctuation error  ] instead of playing with our friends. (There are so[ SO…. THAT ] many people)[ redundant/avoid using THERE BE ] lost their goals (in society)[ redundant ]. Thus, it[unclear pronoun  ] is essential for young people to (have the ability to plan and organize)[repetition  ]. They must know their goals and work for them[unclear pronoun  ]. (By this process)[ wrong phrase ], they will prove their value[ word form error ].

For another reason, planning and organizing will encourage them[unclear pronoun  ] to work harder. If young people have[ grammatical error/subjunctive ] a clear plan, they will [ grammatical error/subjunctive ]think about how to realize it. [punctuation error with conjunction word  ]And they will try to deal with the problem[ what problem? ]. Also,[ spacing error ] they will improve the [article error  ]ability to solve the problem. After they have solved [grammatical error  ]problems, [ word form inconsistency ]they will find that (there is )[redundant  ]a raipd [spelling error  ]progress (had made in their life)[ unclear ]. That[ unclear pronoun ] will make[help  ] people (go ahead)[ unclear ] to achieve more goals.

Take my brother Mike as an instance.[ Example should follow the topic sentence ] He does not like study[ grammatical error ], and always gets[grammatical error  ] low grades. [punctuation error with conjunction word  ]But his favorite girl is a good student. Thus he discided[  inconsistency in tense] to study hard and get good grades. [ All choppy sentences in this paragraph ]He makes an intricate plan (for good grades)[logical confusion  ]. He (never gives up and works so hard)[parallelism issue that causes confusion  ]. Because of the [ article error ]hard work, he had got[ inconsistency in tense ] the highest score in his class. Eventually, he falls in love with his favorite girl. He told me the[article error  ] ability to draw up a plan helped him to achieve his goal. Both of us think that it[unclear pronoun  ] is so cool to have [ article error ]ability to plan and organize[repetition  ].