Reply To: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 15, 2021 at 8:36 pm

Score: 49.6

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.
  2. Many grammatical errors.

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