Reply To: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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January 15, 2021 at 8:36 pm

Score: 49.6

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.
  2. Many grammatical errors.

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