Reply To: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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January 15, 2021 at 8:36 pm
Score: 49.6
Issues:
- About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.
- Many grammatical errors.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.