Reply To: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.  Reply To: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 15, 2021 at 8:43 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. lots of word repetitions. 
  3. Lots of dull BE VERBS. Replace them with concrete verbs.
  4. Extensive punctuation errors.

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