Reply To: The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various particular categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various particular categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Reply To: The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various particular categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 15, 2021 at 8:49 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 65% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Extensive grammatical errors. 

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