Reply To: There is an increasing trend for people to live alone. What is causing this to happen? Will it have a negative or a positive impact on society?

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January 16, 2021 at 6:51 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 
  2. Lots of grammatical errors.
  3. Summarize factors that lead to loneliness in the first paragraph.

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