Reply To: There is an increasing trend for people to live alone. What is causing this to happen? Will it have a negative or a positive impact on society?
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January 16, 2021 at 6:51 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts.
- Lots of grammatical errors.
- Summarize factors that lead to loneliness in the first paragraph.
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