Reply To: The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 16, 2021 at 7:06 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 90% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 35% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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