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January 16, 2021 at 7:12 pm

Score: 47.3

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 40% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 
  3. Extensive grammatical errors.

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