Reply To: Technology creates more problems than it solves and may threaten or damage the quality of life.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Technology creates more problems than it solves and may threaten or damage the quality of life. Reply To: Technology creates more problems than it solves and may threaten or damage the quality of life.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 20, 2021 at 8:34 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Numerous grammatical errors.

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