Reply To: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Reply To: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 22, 2021 at 9:02 pm

Score: 62.7

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. Most sentences are wordy and unclear.
  3. Replace all IT subjects with concrete nouns; remove all ‘ there..be ‘ sentences.

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