Reply To: For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 26, 2021 at 10:46 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. 

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