Reply To: Governments should charge people money for driving into busy places like city centers during rush hours.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 26, 2021 at 10:55 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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