Reply To: In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 27, 2021 at 10:10 pm

Score: 39.6

Issues:

  1. About 65% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 

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