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(In this day and age)[ wordy ], it[unclear pronoun ]’s[informal ] undoubted that people are enjoying the advantages of technology. However, (some people contend that technology creates more problems than it solves)[repetition of the topic ].it[ Spelling error/unclear pronoun ] poses a real threat to people’s lives otherwise[unclear adverb ]. But I do not agree with that[this ] argument. Even though technology may bring few[ article error ] problems,( the level of living most lies with the advancement of technology)[ unclear].
One of the most significant issues we are facing is environmental pollution.As the demand for energy exponentially increasing, factories are firing more coal to get more sources of energy, which causes environmental problems like water and air contamination. Further, sometimes it may cause a far more serious crisis. For example, We gain a great amount of energy from nuclear power, but there was an earthquake of 9 magnitude leading to the leakage of nuclear. And we haven’t been able to clean up the pollution for long , damaging the local ecological environment. According to that , it has yet been decided whether this new technology is a blessing or curse.
But we should not overlook the importance of technology. New technology contributes a lot to our convenience and productivity. The technology of transportation supports us with lots of vehicles, such as subway, airplanes and trains, by which we would not be worried about the bad weather due to these options. And the evolution of technology offers more chances to communicate. We can call friends on the phone, update our daily life on social media like Facebook or Instagram. We could get a great glimpse of the culture of other countries, broaden our horizon, eventually we could become a well-round person.
In conclusion, we should not simply judge technology as good or bad stuff. Only if we utilize that efficiently and safely, can our society benefit a lot.