Reply To: Some people think those oldest school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge. Others, however, think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in detail.
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January 28, 2021 at 3:07 am
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
- Lots of grammatical errors.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.