Reply To: Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 28, 2021 at 5:06 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 75% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.

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