Reply To: Teachers’ salaries should be based on their students’ academic performance. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing Teachers’ salaries should be based on their students’ academic performance. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons. Reply To: Teachers’ salaries should be based on their students’ academic performance. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons.

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University: University of Wisconsin
January 29, 2021 at 9:00 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.
  2. About 30% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. 
  3. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 110 words.

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