Reply To: Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 1, 2021 at 3:37 pm

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Issues:

  1. There are extensive grammatical errors;
  2. Wordy sentences (meaning sentences contain unnecessary words) are also a major issue.

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