Reply To: The main duty of a college professor is to educate students or to do research.
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College professors often find themselves in a dilemma between [doing ] research and teaching given their limited time. If they could grasp the focus of their work responsibility, it would be a cure for this dilemma [ unclear sentence ] . Form [ spelling error ] my perspective, a college professor should give priority to doing research.
To begin with, professors should
not pour too much attention into educating students [limit their efforts in conventional class teaching ] . In this rapidly changing world, university graduates lacking independent learning capability often find it challenging to adapt themselves to [dynamic professional contexts ] work requirements. Thus, the [ article error ] university should be [ replace BE verb with concrete verb ] a place that inspires students to study by themselves. Additionally, in [ unlike ] high school, [where ] teachers are readily available to students due to the small class [ size] scale. In comparison, college lectures [bad comparison with high school ] are often presented [ preposition error] hundreds of students, (thereby precluding a professor heeding various scientific puzzles.) [difficult to read ]
Moreover, doing research can also facilitate professors’ academic career. Generally speaking, a professor’s status depends not only on whether his class is favored by students bu [spelling error ] also on his contributions to academic circles [word form error ] . However, professors who are immersed in research are more likely to achieve academic success. For instance, my uncle is an Architecture professor at Tsinghua University. At the end of 2020, he had come up with a new design concept [ , which could help ]
that hospital [ word form error ] could make an efficient adjustment to [ adjust to/ accommodate..admissions of patients from ] unexpected pandemics such as COVID-19. The result of his research made him an instant celebrity, so an increasing number of students and scholars followed his fame into attending to [preposition error ] his lecture. Tsinghua University also awarded him an honor.
In a nutshell, in order for students to fuel the thinking of autonomous [wrong word ] learning to keep pace with this dynamic world, and for professors themselves to shift their academic status towards better [unclear ] , college professors should
regard doing research as their main responsibility [prioritize ] .
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