Reply To: The extended family(such as grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
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February 1, 2021 at 7:12 pm
Score: 71.7
Issues:
- About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.