Reply To: The extended family(such as grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing The extended family(such as grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Reply To: The extended family(such as grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 1, 2021 at 7:12 pm

Score: 71.7

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them.