Reply To: Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
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I would be affirmative to stand with the first view that students should consider only their talents and interests when choosing a field of study. This view aligns optimally with my own experience in [article error ] choice of major.
I didn’t have any interests or specific skills before entering[/matriculating in ] the[article error ] college. In[/during ] the first year of college [studies ], Majoring[spelling error/coherence issue with the prior clause ] in Chemistry and Material Engineering doesn’t[ tense error ] (trigger me a lot)[ unclear ]. The major (which is) [ I ] selected [therefore ]based on my entering-college [university-entrance ] score. In the next year, I transferred to Computer Science because of my preference and (imagination about the future)[unclear ]. This movement[ /transition ] made me realize that I didn’t want to study on Chemistry or Physical[ Physics ] relevantly[ wrong word ] or do similar work in the future. The [ milestone ]decision I made is such a milestone for me. The one which inspired [ helped ]me to find out what I’m[tense error ] truly interested in and [ what I wanted ]want to put passion into.
In the [article error ]conclusion, I think the most important thing[in terms of choosing an academic path ] is following[ to follow ] my own heart to make the decision and [then ]pursue what I want. In addition, doing what I want could engender lots of passions, which could foster me to be [ shape me into ]a better and better person. Without passions[ word form error ], even though there is a high-paid job, it is really hard to do anything and do well. Furthermore, even though there are few available jobs in our field of study, (I think be a person who can’t be supplanted by any else could twist this dilemma.)[unclear ]
This is why I stand for the first view.