Reply To: Governments should place few if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing Governments should place few if any, restrictions on scientific research and development. Reply To: Governments should place few if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 3, 2021 at 3:06 am

Score: 35.3

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )

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