Reply To: If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.

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February 5, 2021 at 2:56 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)

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