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University: University of Wisconsin
February 5, 2021 at 3:08 am

Score: 55.5

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )

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