Reply To: Were people friendlier in the past than they are today?

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 6, 2021 at 2:24 am

Score: 58

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )

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