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University: University of Wisconsin
Both the reading passage and the lecture discuss a team working on a project[ specify the project ]. [missing organic connection with the last sentence ]The professor puts forward three points and then effectively refutes the opinions of the reading passage.
To begin with, the reading passage argues that a group of people will possess a wider range of expertise and skills. However, the professor claims that some team members did not contribute much at all, getting almost a “free ride”. Besides, group members who work hard were not given[ the ] recognition they
should have gotten [ deserve ].
Next, the author of the reading passage believes that people are more responsive to the task[what task? ] and able to devise creative solutions to problems. On the contrary, the professor argues that reaching an agreement among all group members is difficult. Thus, groups
needed [need ]more time for meetings in order to reach [article error ]consensus.
Finally, the author states that a team member who has a voice in making decisions feels better. However, the professor thinks that some influential members would have a great impact on group decisions. If they go[ grammatical error/subjunctive ] in the wrong direction, sensible members who try to warn the rest of the group may[ grammatical error ] be ignored. As a result, all members are blamed for the unsuccessful project[absolute statement ].
[ There might be more tense errors since you have not presented the prompt. ]