Reply To: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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EuStemJobs Grant Seeker
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University: University of Wisconsin
February 6, 2021 at 9:01 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )
  2. Lots of grammatical errors.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.