Reply To: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Reply To: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 6, 2021 at 9:01 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )
  2. Lots of grammatical errors.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.