Reply To: To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 9, 2021 at 10:15 pm

Score: 30.3

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)

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