Reply To: TPO3

Administrator
University: University of Wisconsin
February 10, 2021 at 2:22 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 75% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 60% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.