Reply To: People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 16, 2021 at 8:14 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )
  2. Lengthy paragraphs; restrict each paragraph to 90 words. (GRE essay 110-word qualifies for non-software revision; 90- word applies to TOEFL/IELTS essay )

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