Reply To: People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve. Reply To: People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 16, 2021 at 8:14 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )
  2. Lengthy paragraphs; restrict each paragraph to 90 words. (GRE essay 110-word qualifies for non-software revision; 90- word applies to TOEFL/IELTS essay )

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