Reply To: Nowadays it is important for people to have regular family meals together.

February 16, 2021 at 11:13 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  3. Extensive use of adverbs (inappropriate use of adverbs often makes sentences unclear);

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.