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University: University of Wisconsin
February 16, 2021 at 11:23 pm

Score: 63.4

Issues:

  1. About 25% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision )

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