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University: University of Wisconsin
February 17, 2021 at 8:08 pm

Score: 55.3

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)

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