Reply To: Some people think that if companies prohibit sending emails to staff on weekend or during other time out of office hours. Staff’s dissatisfactions with their companies will decrease. Others think this will not reduce the overall dissatisfactions among staff.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Some people think that if companies prohibit sending emails to staff on weekend or during other time out of office hours. Staff’s dissatisfactions with their companies will decrease. Others think this will not reduce the overall dissatisfactions among staff. Reply To: Some people think that if companies prohibit sending emails to staff on weekend or during other time out of office hours. Staff’s dissatisfactions with their companies will decrease. Others think this will not reduce the overall dissatisfactions among staff.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 19, 2021 at 9:59 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  3. Most articles were used incorrectly;
  4. Lots of grammatical errors.

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