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TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. Reply To: All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 21, 2021 at 12:51 am

Score: 41.1

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Use your own words to write the first paragraph;
  3. Lots of grammatical errors and logical inconsistencies.

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