Reply To: Government should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Government should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Reply To: Government should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 22, 2021 at 1:42 am

Score: 55.9

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  2. Extensive grammatical errors.

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