Reply To: It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.

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University: University of Wisconsin
February 22, 2021 at 1:52 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  2. Wordy sentences;
  3. Extensive grammatical errors.

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