Reply To: When choosing a place for living, which factor is the most important one for you? -Living in an area that is not expensive -Living close to relatives -living in an area with many shops and restaurants.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing When choosing a place for living, which factor is the most important one for you? -Living in an area that is not expensive -Living close to relatives -living in an area with many shops and restaurants. Reply To: When choosing a place for living, which factor is the most important one for you? -Living in an area that is not expensive -Living close to relatives -living in an area with many shops and restaurants.

March 8, 2021 at 10:04 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical errors.

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