Reply To: Nature’s Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature’s Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing Nature’s Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature’s Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Reply To: Nature’s Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature’s Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area.

March 18, 2021 at 8:44 pm

In the recommendation of [ /by  ] the [article error/ i.e. That has not stopped Karl Haeusgen, chairman of Hawe, a maker of hydraulic pumps, from believing in the long-term success of its German version, Wandel durch Handel. https://www.economist.com/business/2021/01/07/deutschland-ag-continues-to-pour-billions-into-china  ] Vice President of Nature’s Way (NW), he [ unclear pronoun  ]claims that NW should open a store in Plainesiville based on the following four facts: 1. previous record showed[ tense error/inconsistent with ‘are highly profitable’  ] that their[ unclear pronoun  ] business of health food and other products related to health are[ grammatical error  ] highly prifitable[ spelling error  ] in areas where residents have a strong consciousness of health. 2. Plainesville is such a city since (merchants report)[  word form error ] demonstrated[ tense error  ] that running shoes and exercise clothing are well-sold. 3. The[ inconsistency in upper/lower case ‘previous’  ] local heath clubs is more popular than ever. 4. Schoolchildren[ inconsistency in upper/lower case  ] are now required to take part in exercising[ word form error  ] programs. Although the recommendation seems cogent at first glance, with close scrutiny, none of the above[wrong word   ] facts can successfully support the (vice president)[ inconsistency in spelling  ]’s recommendation.

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