Reply To: Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Reply To: Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?

March 22, 2021 at 3:35 pm

Score: 52

Issues:

  1. Lots of grammatical errors;
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision ).

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