Reply To: TPO 21 Integrated

March 23, 2021 at 4:32 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );
  3. Lots of unclear pronouns and misused words.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.