Reply To: It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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March 25, 2021 at 1:53 am

Score: 63

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical/article errors.

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