Reply To: It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

March 25, 2021 at 1:53 am

Score: 63

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Lots of grammatical/article errors.

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