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Nowadays, team assignments and individual assignments are common in both (schools and workplaces)[ word form error ]. While some people prefer to work in a group, others think working alone is more convenient. I am in favor of the latter opinion.
Firstly, working as an individual enables people to work more efficiently. To be more specific, when people work alone, they do not have to depend on others (to choose the same spare time and how to give a speech)[unparalleled ]. For example, I had a presentation on my (academic writing)[ spelling error ] course this semester, and the teacher asked us to prepare individually. When I made the slides, I can[grammatical error ] depend on my opinion, like (saying what and showing what pictures)[ unclear ]. I was clear about what I want[grammatical error ] to deliver to audiences[word form error ], so I can[ grammatical error ] write down the sentences efficiently. However, when students work together, they may argue about (contain which)[grammatical error ] parts in slides, for everyone has (different thinkings)[ grammatical error ]. When students exchange ideas and discuss any difference, they will [ grammatical error ]waste a lot of time.
Secondly, working as an individual is fairer than working in a team. Specifically speaking, it is unfair for people to do all the assignments if they have irresponsible teammates.
For instance, my [ My ]roommate Linda had [such ]a terrible experience. When Linda’s team did [/conducted ]an experiment of [ in relation to ]the biology [ spelling error ]course, her teammates (were lack of)[ wordy ] responsibility. The teammates did not attend at [ preposition error ]the discussion time and refused to check any information. Thus, because [ Because ]the score is crucial, Linda had to finish all the tasks alone. She found[ reviewed relevant ] literature in the library, did [ /performed ]experiments in the laboratory for days, and recorded the[experimental ] result[ results ]. Linda said she was weary and busy those days, [ punctuation/coordinating conjunction error ]and do[grammatical error ] not want to work with these irresponsible people anymore.
In conclusion, on one aspect, doing individual assignments is more efficient (when comparing)[danglling problem ] with teamwork. Moreover, working individually is also fairer, for people only should responsible[ grammatical error ] for themselves.