Reply To: Students do readings on their own is as important as or more important than the reading teachers assigned.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Students do readings on their own is as important as or more important than the reading teachers assigned. Reply To: Students do readings on their own is as important as or more important than the reading teachers assigned.

March 30, 2021 at 1:38 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. About 35% of the sentences are passive; convert them into their active counterparts. (10%- qualifies for non-software TOEFL/IELTS/GRE writing revision );

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