Reply To: The following appeared in a letter to the editor of Parson City’s local newspaper.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing The following appeared in a letter to the editor of Parson City’s local newspaper. Reply To: The following appeared in a letter to the editor of Parson City’s local newspaper.

March 30, 2021 at 2:07 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Simplify or split them. (TOEFL/IELTS: 15%- qualifies for non-software revision; 30% applies to GRE writing)
  2. Repetition of words; punctuation errors (learn how to use semicolon); change vague verbs (i.e., HAVE) to concrete verbs.

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