Reply To: At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

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April 2, 2021 at 3:01 am

Score: 53.3

Issues:

  1. There are many problems in terms of unnecessary passive sentences, unclear pronouns, article errors, choppy sentences, unclear sentences., etc.