Reply To: At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

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April 2, 2021 at 3:01 am

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The issue of fields what universities should invest is a controversial one[ grammatical error and unclear  ]. It[unclear pronoun   ] has been argued[ unnecessary passive  ] that sports and social activities should receive the [ article error  ]same financial support as classes and libraries [ missing a verb here  ]because they [ unclear pronoun  ]are equally important. I, however[ opposite to what?  ], hold the latter[what does the latter refer here?   ] is more significant.